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Bright Eyes smiled, her one good eye fixing upon her love as she flew in toward the cafe. All her hard work as a mail pony... All of the flying through rain, hail, wind, and even snow makes it worth it for this one moment. This moment of bliss when it was just her and her lover.

The other ponies could never understand the love she feels when with him. To them, she's just the silly pony with the mental issues. But he never judges her. He never makes fun of her. He is always there to comfort her when she is at her lowest.

She leans forward, her lips gently kissing the top of the his mushroomed flare. Her tongue flicks across it, causing her to let out an involuntary moan as the taste sends fiery tingles down her spine. She mustn't rush this moment... No... Every second with him feels like an eternity at this point. She trails her tongue along the rim of the flare now, a shudder of anticipation rolling over her equine body as her tongue begins to trail down lower...

She lets out a groan of pleasure, calling out his name in ecstasy almost involuntarily. Reaching forward with her hooves, she grips his bottom and peels the tight covering off to reveal his form fully to her gaze. Tossing the covering over her shoulder, she knew in her heart the others in the plaza were watching her now... Their aghast eyes glued to her lewd display as her tongue danced across his now stripped body to taste EVERY inch. But she didn't care anymore at this point, so lost in her lustful experience. They didn't matter anymore; it was just her and her love. And right now, she needed to feel him fill her mouth.

The grey pegasus opens her muzzle as she starts to take him ever so deep inside. She gags slightly from the size and width... But thanks to her years of practice, she soon feels his warmth and girth fill her muzzle completely. This is the moment she craves. This is the moment when she feels fulfilled and at peace. Sitting in the middle of Ponyville, her muzzle full of him, and getting ready to swallow as everyone watched... Everyone saw her for what she really was...

And then, all too soon, the pleasure hits its climax as the warmth slides down her throat. She starts to swallow, trying to not waste any of this gift from him as the warmth fills her belly completely. she looks up with a satisfied look as the final traces of him remain smeared across her face. Let the others joke or make fun of her all they want... This animalistic moment where she uses and is used by him publically is what makes her happy. Leaving her full and messy, yet happy once again to have fulfilled this fantasy...

Twilight Sparkle tsked and shook her head. "Derpy, what is wrong with you! Look at you, you're a mess." Using her magic, she picked up a cloth to begin wiping the crumbs off from around the grey pegasus's muzzle. "Honestly, Derpy, you are always such a noisy and messy eater! Can't you just eat like a normal pony?"

The grey pegasus just gives Twilight a goofy grin as she tilts her head to the left questioningly. "Muffins?"
This is bad, and I feel bad!

I just wrote this on a lark to warm me up for finishing the more serious FlutterMac OTP Romance. Pygmy helped me edit it up to be somewhat worth uploading. He feels bad, too.
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rilator Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Student Artist
at first i was like well thi should be good. then i was like ok i should turn this off now. wtf i cant turn it off oh my god thats just... wait a minute? this is... oh ok i get it now. yes i wouldnt have figured out the first part if it weren t for my sisters dirty mind corrupting mine. GAAAH! I NEED PURIFICATION POWDER!
Xxawesomesauc3xX Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2013
Why does the beginning say Bright Eyes and not Derpy Hooves?
9ogo Featured By Owner Aug 2, 2012
so lemme get this straight, she had oral sex with some stallion, in public?.....i wanna go to equestria....
RoyGBiv-MLP Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
No, she ate a muffin... Sheesh, such a dirty mind.
9ogo Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012
oops sorry, posted before the end :3 my bad
Severepwner Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012
Made me lol.
Rainbowdasher29 Featured By Owner May 29, 2012  Hobbyist Filmographer
I like how you didn't let on that it was a muffin. I actually thought it know. Don't feel bad!
Pinklopunny13 Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ikr. I was so confused, but not I ain't. :)
zoie-the-shadow Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012
Zlaod Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2012
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